Expposition

 Use the news video in the worksheet as your writings reference

°> Thesis:

Today, I heard the news that the police have arrested Bjorka. I don’t think the Man that the police have arrested is Bjorka because he doesn’t have a computer. I strongly believe that people who don’t have a computer can do hacking activity.

°> In my opinion,the police can be more careful in dealing with cases so a case like this will not happen again

°> Although,the police got it wrong that's real news. 



°> Argument 2:

According to the news,the police made a wrong arrest in dealing with the case.


Consequently,people who are not quilty can be arrested by the police 

°> Reiteration:

In conclusion, the police were not careful due to arrested the wrong person

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